setzer777 wrote:Heh, so...seemed well written for a few paragraphs?
My appreciation of the text was skewed by the originality of the premise.
The rest of the grinding (freudian slip, meant to write "reading") went as follow:
"- Tell me more about the demons! What about their power struggles? What is the little guy about to do?
- The X-52mma hollow shell triple battery locked on him. It can vaporise a bee knee at 200km, and it costs 400 thousand dollars to fire this weapon for 12 seconds. The manufacturer decided to..."
"- Oh oh oh what is Michael going to do next?
- Well the portal opened and ALL WILL FEAR MY GIANT NEW GUN! Did I tell you how humans are awesome? Yes? I probably didn't tell you this enough. So they are awesome, because they kill stuff very well with their 30.05 doublefuck emptied lead rounds that..."
"- So what's the next chapter about?
- ABORTION SUCKS
"- Oh, so this character can open portals?
- Yes, and she's a TRANSSEXUAL, and into S&M, and every bad guy hates her because she's a TRANSSEXUAL. That means she changed sex and was a guy before. And the bad guys hate her because of this. Did I mention her sex change?
- What does this add to the charac...
- So her utterly irrelevant boyfriend pulled her leash..."